Becoming Starfire's Captain Begins with Martial Arts
Martial Arts + Battleship + Sci-fi + System
Martial arts were revived, and technology flourished. This was a special interstellar era where martial arts civilization and future technology were intertwined.
It was also an interstellar era filled with smoke. Civilization invasions, war colonization, war, and death were everywhere.
An ordinary teenager would accidentally activate the system and enter a dream space, occasionally obtaining various opportunities and resolving various dangers.
Strange Hotel, Death Gray Mist, Strange Corpses, Star Field Battlefield, gaming abilities…
The mysterious system's alternate dimension would always bring him different kinds of surprises, or rather, scares?
He wanted to see how the young man would use the system to step into the sea of stars, explore the endless universe, and challenge the infinite possibilities.
The story of an ordinary teenager growing up.
The clouds are not suppressed
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