kage no jitsuryokusha otaku

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The word Kage is thrown around too much in this story. Just anyone can be called kage, also low kage, mid kage, high kage…this isn’t a cultivation story. Kage is Kage! Hiashi is a jounin, not a kage!!!!! Guy wasn’t kage level till very very much later yet Danzo is rating Guy as high kage before the chunin exams, Guy that was on par with Kakashi then, would you say Kakashi was kage level too? Also Neji found it hard to beat two jounin level samurai and had to be hospitalized after the battle and was also rated low kage Please just stop using the word kage altogether cos this is just disrespectful!

I gave this novel: Writing Quality 4/5 ~ in comparison to other originals, decent English Stability of Updates 3/5 (unsure how stable the updates are, opted for the middle) Story Development 3/5 ~ I feel I was VERY generous with this score Character Design 2/5 ~ I feel I was quite generous with this score given lack of just about everything regarding characters and their interactions World Background ~ Less generous than with Char. Design with this score as there has been a tiny bit of W.Background, but not memorable This novel is all about mindless, senseless slaughter and... that's about it thus far. No time is spent on character growth. MC is an otaku! When otaku angry, otaku SMASH! Otaku want points! Otaku no forgive! Otaku no mercy! You follow orders and trash my restaurant with mortal weapons? You mortal? Otaku no care! Otaku angry, otaku SMASH! huehuehue xd This is what it feels like to read this novel. The MC gets an invincibility barrier that lasts for 500 hits at chapter 1 and uses it to do stupid **** as if he has never played a game in his life. The system gives him a bunch of op usable items that he uses to completely ignore cultivation levels and otaku angry, otaku SMASH! The MC is an otaku that apparently has no qualms about, quite literally, mindless slaughter and torture. Subjectively speaking I do not like these kinds MC's as they make the novel completely pointless to read. There is no personality to them, no hint of intelligence. The word 'overwhelm' means 'kill everything that offends you' here, regardless of how small the offense seems to be. I do not understand where this is supposed to go as no purpose has been given whatsoever. Just otaku angry, otaku smash. We're done-zo with the fun-zo, otaku angry, otaku smash. You're probably annoyed with reading this already, huh? But you know what? Otaku angry, otaku smash. Objectively speaking, my scoring has been objective as I've not taken into account anything I've said in my rant about this novel. There is no info truly given about the mc - what kind of a person he was before rebirth and how he's changing afterwards. His savage personality is sometimes explained as being influence by the system and sometimes the author just says "...because he's an otaku..." or "...as an otaku...". The allied side characters(females ofc) are completely irrelevant to everything regarding the MC other than being potential **** mates due the nature of the system/MC pairing, nothing can come out of those characters. I honestly that remember if the world itself was every mentioned in the novel - don't even know where the MC is but that might be my fault for not remembering(that's how memorable the setting is with the info we're given). The novel seems to want to thread the path between 'Leveling up and becoming undefeatable' and 'Ultimate scheming system' but it just... otaku angry, otaku smash y'know?

This is complete nonsense. The author seriously downplayed the power level of Kage+ and S-rank+ ninjutsu, and at the same time, for some reason, greatly exaggerated the strength of jōnin and B–A rank ninjutsu. It turns into absurdity when a small group of “weaklings” can pressure a powerful Kage. Ridiculous. I get the feeling this author thinks a few jōnin would be enough to kill the Third Raikage. The author clearly doesn’t understand the massive gap between jōnin/elite jōnin and Kage-level or super-Kage-level shinobi.

for anyone reading the reviews, just read yami kage... the author basically copied his story from yami kage except for the fact other reincarnated people are in naruto for some odd reason