howard mandel

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The combination between mc,howard, and leonard is top notch!!!!!!, fsefsefsefsfsefsefsefsefsefsefsefsefsefsfsefsefsefsefsefsfsefsfsfsfsfsfsfsefsefsefsfs

Can you use AI please? Your writing is understandable but quite bad and also incredibly fast paced. It skipped through the MC killing Howards wife to staying in a room for Howard to wake up and then going to a secret hideout of Howard's in Hells Kitchen and then leaving the base and Howard after picking up a few weapons so far that has all happened within one chapter and barely any communication with each other.

F**king perfect! I see Howard set up a spy organization to locate and help the mutants, like the SHIELD but who does not hate mutants but rather protects them from government and organizations like SHIELD where Hydra, imagine that the SHIELD who thinks he is better passes his life without the knowledge of the mutants. And maybe change the name of mutants too because it looks like cancer. And Howard could find the tesseract before Howard Stark and keep it for him

Its overall good. But, it feels like a chinese fic. I mean, there is no face slapping or losing face which I am gratefull for. But there are some plot holes too. Just to make them see Main character seen as a competent person, he rescued Howard stark from things which no other normal human could do. Howard stark would've died if he didnt interfere. I mean, In his second save, he idenifies poison in the beverage they bring to them in howard's office. how does he knows what poison smells like? And if Howard was going to die, Who was going to save him in the first place?