wrongly spelled

translation was missing key words. some words were not spelled correctly. use of the word not was used wrongly as in "not now" when it should be as "now ".

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This is a novel of quality! It easily beats the "top" rankers. The only critique I have is the confusing beginning. You have to read 50+ chapters to get to the sweet stuff. A lot of names are switched randomly and sometimes wrongly spelled (Siao --> Xiao), consistency is key! The story itself is brilliant, though traces of plot armor appears, the execution is such that most people wouldn't notice (unlike a whole lot of the other novels on this site...).

I am so hooked on this story, can't wait for the next update. I would say that although the first few chapters were cliff-hangers but just be patient, your questions will be answered one by one by the following chapters. Also, dear author, there are some/few grammatical errors, missing words and wrongly spelled words but it does not affect the quality of the story anyway. To everyone, happy reading, few suprises are on the way.

ok you idiot first it is spelled KONOHA NOT KANOHA you imbecile and his name is spelled SASUKE NOT SAUSKE LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL i bet in every story you write it is spelled wrong