I'm Aizen, the fifth generation Naruto Koba
After the Rebellion of the Nine Tails, Muye's situation was not very good.
Orochimaru defected, Zairai wandered around, Gangshou Ji fainted from blood, Ape Flying Day Chop was getting old, Shimura Tenzo was ambitious, Kakashi was addicted to not making progress, Uchiha was plotting against the divine weapon...
In short, none of them were reliable!
Seeing that the chaos in the village was imminent, Aizen, who had been lying low in the village for a long time, expressed that the situation was good. He walked from behind the scenes to the front stage and said to everyone,
"My name is Aizen Yuusuke. I'm a ninja who's good at illusions. Now I want to become the fifth generation Naruto, who agrees, who disagrees?"
Emperor Wuyan, Ah Q
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Me encanta la historia solo que el problema es que no sabe expresar las situaciones correctamente y no le esta dando casi ninguna historia de fondo ni mensiona casi ningun punto de vista de otro personaje importante aparte de sus pensamientos acasionalmente Ademas de que yo como lector encuentro dificultades para saber que personaje esta hablando y cuando otro esta pensando yo recomendaria que separe la forma de escribir los dialogos como por ejemplo -Hola- personaje hablando Kayle:-oye leon cuando me daras una hija- (Hola) personaje pensando Leon:(mierda y ahora que le digo) [Hola] accion narrada de un personaje [Entonces leon ingreso sin ninguna duda dentro del interior de kayle impregnando sus paredes internas y pintando de blanco todo]