act as your age

My only problem with this story is the fact that the children act like adults. I assume the author doesn't know children the same age as the characters to know how they normally act.

I like the premise and the plot but the stuff the characters get up to and how they behave at supposedly 10 years of age...it's just not very believable. They don't act like kids of that age and it bothers me kinda

mc is a emotion less robot and all 11 yr olds won't act the age and plot is forced with no real conversations and over explanations

First off I love this novel, but my only issue is the characters need to be smarter and more mature. Imagine how wise someone is when they are 100 years old. These characters are literally over a million years old and they are actual children. They don’t act their age at all and they are not smart and scheming and someone their age should be. Legion has time and time again been fooled and they seem to not learn their lesson. That’s just one example. If the author fixes the characters to act their age it would add so much more to the suspense of the novel and make it more enjoyable.