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THE BILLIONAIRE'S HOUSEMAID
Author: Adesua_Fayokemi
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After falling into a trap created, David lay with his family housemaid Daphne, and it resulted in a sudden unplanned pregnancy. David was forced to marry the family housemaid Daphne, to save his family image. Will he accept to marry opportunistic Daphne? Or will he resist to the end? Let's find out!!!!!! @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ This creation is participating in the ongoing spirit contest. Please I need your utmost contributions, your review, and your d comment, and please add the story to your library. Thanks.
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2020-06-11

First of all, this is a well written story, not many grammatical or spelling errors, so it is a very comfortable read. Way better than most. But the first few chapters are rushed and cut down to minimal content. The scene where Hadrian gets adopted is majorly important, but so short that you don't get the feeling that it happened at all. It is like a cut down version of the memory of a dream you had a week ago. The motives and relations/backstorys are nebulous, like Lily being a submissive who follows James decision(If you can call that a decision, he didn't even have a single coherent thought in that scene) to give away one of her 4 year old children without even showing her supposed displeasure, or the way Dorea practically jumped at the chance to take Hadrian as her own while removing James as Heir. Maybe they were already mayor disagreements before, but we don't know because there is no backstory. Bdw. Why isn't Sirius Heir Black, the current Lord should still be alive and Dorea was never from the main branch. I could speculate a lot of things and at the moment it feels like Dorea wants a new try at training a Heir because she failed the first time and Lily is more of a housemaid than a wife. The trend sadly continues, because the world building is just as flawed. Examples: Magic elementry school starting at 7 without subjects like English, History, Math etc. I know this isn't covered in the original, but at 11 most children are at least able to write and do basic calculations, even if taught by their parents, but at 7? Dueling at 7? Do wizard children develop differently? Do all Wizards posses genius level intellect? Not unimaginable if explained right. I mean every single one can develop a mind palace approximation , so who knows. In addition the four houses are practically identical with the values they are looking for. Why would Americans copy that flawed system? Hogwarts had 4 founders and people keep at it because it is tradition, but a school founded hundreds of years later making the same decision/mistake? Conclusion: Author can write, but has not thought trough the world and the characters background. Or he just doesn't want to tell us. Tipp: Authors Note to explain basic world building and character profiles. The community can help.

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What is the best Freida McFadden novel?
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2024-12-07 13:35
One of the highly regarded Freida McFadden novels is 'The Housemaid'. It has a captivating plot filled with mystery and suspense. The characters are well - developed, and the twists and turns keep readers on the edge of their seats.
What makes Freida McFadden novels so engaging?
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2024-12-01 07:20
Her complex characters. In her novels like 'The Nurse', the characters are not one - dimensional. They have their own motives, secrets, and flaws, which makes them feel real and makes the reader more invested in the story.
Which Freida McFadden novel should I start with as a beginner?
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2024-12-07 16:32
I'd recommend starting with 'The Housemaid'. It's relatively easy to get into and gives a good taste of McFadden's style of writing mystery and creating complex characters.
Can you recommend some popular Freida McFadden novels?
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2024-11-30 16:21
One of her popular novels is 'The Housemaid'. It has a captivating plot full of mystery and suspense. The story follows a housemaid who discovers secrets within the household she works in.
What is the appeal of 'The Housemaid' manhwa?
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2025-05-24 09:49
It's got a great story and interesting characters. The art style is also really appealing.
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