Poetry: Amoureax Amant's 101 Poems to BFF 1.0
This is my first poetry to my BFF, written on March 7th, 2023.
Peach blossom bloomed as gorgeous as bloom rain
By: Amoureax Amant
Peach blossom bloomed as gorgeous as bloom rain,
at branch in full peach blossom on mountain,
but left tree branch with wind through amber lake,
toward fragrant sea like drifting snowflake.
Just left when butterfly danced through peach tree,
just left when hummingbird echoed with bee,
when rising sun turned dark cloud peach blossom,
when drifting rain fell from misty cloud dome.
What if peach blossom stayed till September,
peach blossom might neither dance through water,
nor travel with light breeze through small arbor,
toward vast sea like boat sailed from harbor.
What if peach asked of peach blossom's journey,
here's the answer, freer than in valley.
Amoureax_Amant · Urban
Story is good, makes you want to know what comes next or why did that happen. but the writing is like poetry, its descriptive which good but it’s a little much when almost every sentence is like that though. so good story but chill on the poetry. last thing mc is all over the place.