aika robredo

Exp-Sect

dlnnn

2019-10-27

So far I am enjoying this story, that's a huge plus because it is refreshing and the pacing is good.. i like the change in how the characters attitude but there are so many plot holes like (mainly on aika's awakening) First, when aika's awakening, understandable that ophis's snake makes the sacred gear awakens, however in transforming aika to shinigami is somewhat derailed, in the standard convertion (bleach), strawberry's physical body and soul are separated, Second, when kisuke reiatsu-ki inserted to aika when the transitioning happens, it is supposedly converts aika to a "surrogate shinigami" (strawberry's words) which means, aika is not in the position in transforming to hollow because kisuke supply some of its reiatsu ki to her body, third, when the method of converting to shinigami/hollow the enroachment starts but it should not happen because aika's physical body and soul are not separted and the chain connecting the two is not broken, fourth, when sacred gear of aika has consciousness i am assuming it is the same as their zanpakto but in order for aika to be fully pledge as shinigami it must search its true essence(spirit ribbon:red) and mold its own reiatsu ki (without kisuke's reiatsu ki), in my point of view (as a reader/critic), it should be a great development of the story when aika exhaust all the reiatsu ki given by kisuke following the story flow having a conflict where aika's sacred gears are broken, return as a common story's logic devil reincarnate (which is not because aika is human) with sacred gears awaken, going thru the process of transforming to a real shinigami (a hybrid one because its a dxd world), struggling to not become a hollow, having yoruichi's training and so on and so forth, get's my point? Hahahaha, but still it is my blabbering and theory of all things, hope this will give you ideas on your story development, and no offense, it is just my opinion, feel free to ignore it :)

Playing with other Supernaturals

Goyya · Anime & Comics

1431 Chs

Aika_Ai

2021-01-16

Ok Aika bantu kasih review dan kasih **, btw selamat udah lolos na, tetep semangat dan terus berkarya ya. Aika selalu mendukungmu 😘 Ceritamu bagus-bagus kok, terutama yang kemarin itu sangat aku sukai 😍😭🤧👍 Mantap jiwa keren kau na.

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