kiku hetalia

Wah, ceritanya fantasinya keren banget, kak. Saya sangat suka karakter Shin, Kiku, Nao, Naoki mereka keren banget. Berasa ikut berpetualang bersama Shin saya. Keren, kak

Give this story 2 star if you like this story. Hi , readers... jujur aku suka anime hetalia, dan aku pikir akan menarik jika aku menulis cerita sejarah tentang dunia, meski tidak 100% author menulis sejarah aslinya , akan ada beberapa perbedaan karena author terkadang suka alternatif sejarah, dan author ingin mencobanya. Karena itu author memberi bintang 2 karena author pikir tulisan author ada beberapa typo atau grammar error di setiap kisah di hetalia inggris, meski author sudah mengusahakan tidak ada kesalahan tapi masih ada kesalahan jadi beri author bintang 2 ya. Jika suka cerita author like , comment, vote power stone. Jika nggak suka jangan baca dan jangan ngomong jelek di cerita author ini. Author benci orang ngomong jelek di ceritaku , meski kenyataannya dia belum membaca ceritaku sebenarnya.

Hi , readers... to be honest I like hetalia anime, and I think it would be interesting if I write a historical story about the world, even though author is not 100% writing the original history, there will be some differences because author sometimes likes alternative history, and the author wants to try it. Because of that author gives 2 stars because author thinks the author's writing has several typos or grammatical errors in every story in English Hetalia, even though author has tried to make no mistakes but there are still errors so I give the story 2 stars. If you like the author's story like, comment, vote power stone. If you don't like it, don't read and don't say bad things about this author's story. I hates people talking bad thing in my story, even though in reality he/she hasn't actually read my story.

The story is good, very original compared to the other MHA fiction. It is not the classic story of the hero and does not follow the vicissitudes that we all know, which I appreciated very much. Unfortunately, there are many negative sides, impossible to miss, since they are objective problems and have nothing to do with my preferences. Let's start with Erza and Kiku. Kiku: From the way the author described it, you don't understand her emotions. At 4/5 years old, she blushes as soon as she meets Suzuki and here is my first "why?". Her relationship with Mc is confused. Kuki can sleep on Suzuki's legs without feeling the least bit of shame, but when she sees him without a shirt (which she should be used to seeing) she blushing randomly. Shortly after they declare themselves and there is a completely normal kiss. Scene of the appointment is promoted. Erza: What is she doing in the world of MHA? But it's the minor problem, just think it's an alternative universe of BHA, where Erza was born in this world. Mc is from earth, didn't he recognize her? Relationship with Suziki already better than Kuki, except for their first kiss, totally exaggerated. Was there really any need to enter the tongue in this way? She was agitated and anxious and after hearing that Suzuki also has feelings for her, boom, let's use the tongue! Then there are also problems on the characterization of the protagonist, initially he does not want to kill and then "does nothing, sooner or later I will have to do it", he was trained to kill and various things. No, it is not an evolution of the character, he was already mature right away, with clear ideologies, he was not a classic child. Maybe something happened that made him completely change his mind, but for now it doesn't seem like that at all. All in all, I recommend the story, hoping that the characterization errors will gradually decrease.

Thoughts as of Chapter 240. The pacing at the beginning may seem too fast for people. With all the events going on, the female lead Terashima Lila goes to another town Light Town and disguises herself using the name Kiku Ari. Unlike most novels on this site. This one uses a Japanese setting and characters. Music, romance and demons? Sound like your type of story yet? Though the 'powers' and 'demons' aspect is not truly covered until end volume 1 and volume 2. I like how the author puts the emphasis on different characters per volume. So us readers get to know and learn about all the characters in the story. Some may think there's too many characters introduced, but I believe the small introduction given by the author is more than enough to clear any confusion. As of volume three, the story has gotten a lot more interesting and I'm glad the author's writing style has gotten a lot better too. Volume 1: Introduction to some key secondary characters. Alongside the music aspect of the novel. Volume 2: Focuses on individual character arcs for the top three characters. Volume 3: More on the music aspect and relationship development between the FL and ML. Secrets are uncovered, FL half brother becomes more prominent in the story alongside a character named Kogami Yori. With all the events occurring one may ask what's the actual plot line? The author provides a good explanation in the synopsis. To summarize. It's about a young girl who travels to a new town, confronts all the changes while still trying to maintain her regular life as a top idol and realize her new dreams. It's not a CEO romance story and some may stray away from this love t--r-i-a-n-g-l-e novel. But I will continue reading till the end. Best of luck author.