ichigo x byakuya

Dont make ichigo join any peerage...make him a one man army..thats what he is....also dont make him like rias..we all know it'll only be because he is strong....irina x ichigo x sona x ?....add romance and fluff..make Ichigo at least satan class..cause he was god level when he used mugetsu...ANYWAY..GOOD NOVEL

Like legit the only good thing about this is the number or releases... ffs, why you gotta NTR the MC. We demand to kill off ichigo, this story would be 100x better if either the memory shards didn't exist or Sora is replaced as future ichigo or something, that way it wouldn't be truly NTR, but stupid author gotta make us be hating...

4 stars just cause long ass chp with decent eng and a decent plot. BUT man ur bk be retarded. -If MC was trained since young age how the hell wouldnt he not know about devils? its stupid..parents would obviously tell him everything. [meaning basic info]...its retarded -Dude, bleach and dxd very different worlds, powerwise, bleach is better,and they have more hax abilities...unless u bridge em, which is kinda impossible ur story is fked -MC is strong as start ichigo, u said it [lets assume he is rukia retrieval arc ichigo,,,weakest ichigo...] ...this should more or less be weakest at high ultimate class and strongest at satan class,,,ichigo is overpowered, his son should be even more so, considering he is his son and has trained properly....I mean ichigo with in a couple weeks training was matching a century old byakuya and vice captains....ur MC better be stupid OP but it seems u neutered him considering this dude couldnt sense ****...thats retarded.. -MC is too young,,,him being a middle school is a bad starting age, cause for obvious reasons. might be judging too soon but ur bk has some retarded ****, idk, obviously I am judging too soon, will read but eh....signs are signs

I always like it when authors insert characters with the power to guide the story. In this case, the mc became Byakuya's uncle by marrying his aunt. The writing is not bad, by Webnovel standards. I like the way some characters change too. The following is my major point against it. He is strong and has a lot of influence. I liked it up to the point where he let Hisana die, even though he could've healed her, because he 'shipped,' author's words, Byakuya and Rukia better. It was forced, and I felt like Byakuya deserved better. Byakuya treats you as an uncle and respects you, yet you let the love of his life die because you preferred ByakuyaxRukia fanfics. What is the point of such a character if you will leave important things like that unchanged, especially if you've warmed up to Byakuya as his uncle. The author doing this for such a stupid reason cheapens the mc choices for me. If you don't care who Byakuya ends up with or want him with Rukia, this may be an OK fanfic for you.

This is not really bleach fanfiction, its completely AU with just the same character names. I mean can you imagine someone saying that I am writing a bleach fic and then putting byakuya in the same class as aizen and urahara? and moreover byakuya is basically stronger than yoruichi.