quidditch pitch hogwarts

Chapters today looking good looking good looking good looking good rainy day time to bring the mountain secrets are always the ones who get clobbered by the other team Frank's Shameless by 11:00 the whole school seem to be out in the stands around the Quidditch pitch

Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.Quidditch team, spattered with mud from head to foot, was gathered around his bed.

Read up to C64 and cant believe I even got that far. The MC is just not likeable. I cant stand his actions or thoughts, just a cringy 'chunibyo' on sugar even though he should mentally be 30 years old but you get this instead ( although the Author commented that there is a reason for it but that doesn't make the MC likeable ). His training arc at the beginning also makes no sense considering the slow pace of the story and once he got to Hogwarts he is barely doing any training/research and even plans on joining the Quidditch Team. So why the training arc to push him up to Adult Wizard standards? he has enough free time at Hogwarts that could've been used. The writing quality is acceptable considering he is writing in Spanish and translating to English via Google Translator. Although it looks like the Author picked up the story pace later on but the first 60 chapters are only pre Hogwarts + first 2 weeks at Hogwarts which is pretty slow for 200+ chapters in 1+ year. If you can ignore or stand the MC then this FF might be worth reading in 2-3 years.

i just don't like everything abot this novel: mc, ppl and how they behave, strange mc/at decisions. Well my expectation about hp verse play role, because what i want from hp ff is to mc dive into magic and find new aspects of it, whitch would be original or\and interesting. Like -come on guys - who got isekaied from the world without any form of mystic energy should know how to appreciate fking magic and pave your own path... and here... ok let me give you example: first plan MC got after getting in hogwarts waaaaas to fix his REPUTATION.... byyyyy playing quidditch ... and showing ROR to quidditch team for training.... its just ... Few times i just wanted to throw my phone in the wall. If you love magic and want to save your nerves - don't read it.

I only have one small issue with the story and that is that harry or Harrison loathes quidditch. Otherwise stories great as of chapter 109