tien x yamcha

In my opinion, I suggest that the story be about the reincarnation of one of the oppressed main characters who has potential in the story. I also advise you to stay away from the characters used in a lot of fan stories, such as Yamcha, Krillin, Tien Tien, and Gohan.

Keep it up bro. I finally found someone who's not sayian I'm so excited to see how he gets stronger always thought krillan and yamcha n tien could get stronger I'm rooting for this man

The writing quality is equivalent of the average chinese novel. so ehh... Story Development is eh... Character Design is also eh... nothing special but nothing out of the ordinary or OCC. Until the Yamcha incident. Keep reading to know why. oh I also got insulted as Yamcha fanboy for giving valid criticism lol World Background is also eh. The novel doesn't really explore the world building then again its a fanfiction. Most ff don't even bother w this part. So let's talk about the Yamcha incident. Let me explain like those 4chan story because it much more fun. >be me a ff enjoyer >reading a DBZ ff >hoping it be a good a ff where it fix many mistake that Toriyama made such as neglecting the OG series such as Krillin, Yamcha, and Tien. >yamcha become much much stronger >yamcha IQ is lowered to room temperature for some reason >become a comic relief telling the enemy about the Dragonball because? >still die to sibamen suicidal attack >me criticize author for writing Yamcha so Out Of Character >got called as Yamcha fanboy in return LOL ff author aren't the most mature being but this is just childish. Don't bother reading. Look elsewhere maybe fanfiction.net.

Hahahaha tong li sekali lagi ditampar sama duan ling tien sehingga dendamnya sudah pengen bunuh duan ling tien ...temen temen ling tien takut karrna tong li adalah sepupu pangeran ke lima

Can you imagine Yamcha winning? of course you can't. What if we add Viltrumite powers on him? Still a no? I mean... considering he is the mc in this fic, lay witness to a Yamcha who wins. Scarier than the Batman who laughs, this is the legendary, almighty, Yamcha who wins.