The writing quality is equivalent of the average chinese novel. so ehh... Story Development is eh... Character Design is also eh... nothing special but nothing out of the ordinary or OCC. Until the Yamcha incident. Keep reading to know why. oh I also got insulted as Yamcha fanboy for giving valid criticism lol World Background is also eh. The novel doesn't really explore the world building then again its a fanfiction. Most ff don't even bother w this part. So let's talk about the Yamcha incident. Let me explain like those 4chan story because it much more fun. >be me a ff enjoyer >reading a DBZ ff >hoping it be a good a ff where it fix many mistake that Toriyama made such as neglecting the OG series such as Krillin, Yamcha, and Tien. >yamcha become much much stronger >yamcha IQ is lowered to room temperature for some reason >become a comic relief telling the enemy about the Dragonball because? >still die to sibamen suicidal attack >me criticize author for writing Yamcha so Out Of Character >got called as Yamcha fanboy in return LOL ff author aren't the most mature being but this is just childish. Don't bother reading. Look elsewhere maybe fanfiction.net.
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Okay, Yamcha fanboy. Goodbye
Who hurt you lol? Can't even take criticism without sounding like a 12 year old.
LordPhenex026:Okay, Yamcha fanboy. Goodbye
To be fair, you said his novel was meh, or fairly normal, but then proceeded to give him a 1 star. If I was him I wouldn't listen to your criticism either.
rubber_band123:Who hurt you lol? Can't even take criticism without sounding like a 12 year old.
I'm not siding with the author but... is all he did call you a Yamcha fanboy? It's annoying to hear but it doesn't sound THAT bad that you think he's immature and saying he 'showed his true colors'. Idk, just some outside perspective.
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LordPhenex026:Okay, Yamcha fanboy. Goodbye
I don't like average Chinese ff either. Do you have any suggestion from wn or ff.net?
