nala ray fucking

Boredom personified. I read this on my alt just to get a good grasp on the story. So far (15 Chapters) it's literally just a fucking sting ray that can't evolve. That's it, that is the only thing unique about it's entire plot. He does get passive upgrades and stuff like that but he's still just a fucking sting ray. Writing Quality- 3 Simply mediocre; no beautiful sentence structure or truly grasping words. Nothing of that sorts Updates- Frequent Story Development-0, None; it's just a stingray that's underwater. All it does is be a stingray and acquire upgrades. Character Design- 0, Literally none There's literally no development, no prior information nothing that can let us formulate even a fucking fandom wiki page for MC. World Background- It's literally just fucking underwater.

Crazy love story, especially Ray and Kai they are both crazy with each other. Ray was seriouly in love with kai. That if Kai doesn't remember Ray he instinctively love in with him

Fuck such a novel.I am business student and I don't know about others but I feel stifled reading novel how can be such a word exist it is totally impossible.other act how they want and fucking mc is retard.I think author should first research material than fucking right novel.A lot of novel just go in author direction with mere ray of logic. Yeah it is fantasy but you can't rule out basic law.Even society basic law should be given due attention

I also need a brilliant idea to get the roommates and I will have to read the roommates are you be able and imp is the drama of a new baby and I will have to be in d inj Nala varuo and the drama love you and

Jalan ceritanya agak sulit di tebakk. Jadi penasaran jalan ceritanya kaya gimana. Kira - kira Nala jatuh cinta sama siapa ya? Semangat ya outhor nulis ceritanya. Semoga sukses