small spaces

Love the story, Just a small tip: adding spaces will make it easier to read. You’re doing great keep it up🤘👏 highly recommend everyone.

Slowly from beginning theres small imperfections of ones not having spaces furcon the sentences…but if it stopped there it would’ve been mah okay and could keep going and whatnot but…chapter 3 is unreadable, sentences without spaces, and random caps inbetween and overall…no spaces means no sentences, means no paragraph, which means no story in end. Concept is good, the background tho only thru two pages seems like it’s starting out flushed, but…no spaces no story in end. And in that way, that one thing ruins it all. Fix that, and make it readable, then you’d have a very good story author, or well one that can have the potential to be good.

the story seems promising and cool, the plot and character are attractive the story is hooking, but there are few things that can spoil the fun, like punctuation mark spaces and other minor errors , and small Grammatical errors or else its a good read

Breath of fresh air, really decently written, there's small spaces where we see indication of AI translation but it's minimal, only opinion I have is if using AI to translate to tell the AI to not change the words themselves.

Nice story. Characters and world background are excellent. No complaints there. Only I faced some problem with the paragraphs and punctuations . You should probably give some spaces between paragraphs more precisely make them some what small. Other than that no worries. Keep writing and all the best.