To achieve immortality, I cultivate using Qi Luck
Traversing the Nine Provinces in the Immortal Cultivation World, Lu Yuan possessed the Dao Fruit of longevity, an eternal lifespan. If he were careful, he could anticipate the Immortal Method.
This was indeed a beautiful thing.
However, he was born during the Age of Dharma Decline, with spiritual energy depleted and the Immortal Method difficult. The great path was elusive.
Even worse, the Immortal Cultivation World of the Nine Provinces was on the verge of collapse, and the four poles were about to fall, marking the end of an era.
If that was the case, why shouldn't a man take up his sword and conquer fifty states across the mountains?
To survive in the Age of Dharma Decline, Lu Yuan cultivated the ancient Way of Control Pneuma, established an Immortal Dynasty, and gathered Qi Luck. He brought order to the Nine Provinces and peace to the four seas.
Gathering strength from across the world, he ascended to immortality step by step.
In ancient times, there were three Human Emperors: Hua Guang, Xia Xi, and Hao Tian.
Who is the Human Emperor now?
It is Emperor Chu Luyuan.
Toast to the bright moon · Eastern
The story seems fine, but not outstanding, up to the 50th chapter that I've read. The MC is mediocre but interesting enough to follow and the world is different enough that I want to know more. The major issue I have is that the author clearly has no understanding of the English language. I can forgive mistranslations and maybe even poor grammar to an extent, but this story is not a translation; This is an original work written in English that has THE. WORST. GRAMMAR. EVER. It is completely unreadable. The introduction to the novel admits that it is rough for the first 36 chapters. This is a LIE. At no point after the 36th chapter did the quality improve. Simple things such as matching tense and plurality of the noun to the verb are nonexistent. The author does not understand the English language and cannot form a single proper sentence period. I believe this novel could be very good if the author hired an editor to correct the incoherent grammar, but until then this is a story ruined and made unreadable by the lack of understanding of the language it is written in.