fullbring ichigo

good start. keep this up. OP ichigo= good ichigo. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An interesting start to the story. The system doesn't seem like too much of slaave driver with no type of forced quests. The unique ability of fullbring is a mystery unless you're a shounen character that explains about own special abilities/trump card to enemies. As long as MC is pragmatic and even a bit paranoid even among the so called "allies" in his approach about his fullbring the flaw of the ability is really hard to just guess. And it is just the first of many mystical abilities I think. The Fan-fic has me hooked.

first and foremost idk why the title is like this like "ichigo takes over soul society" as ichigo is more like a side character of the mc and aizen, his only buff is that he is not suppressed by the quincy power in himself and that's it, even until the end he is not more powerfull then his canon part maybe even a little weaker (horn of salvation is not unlocked here), as i said idk why the title was that, orihime in comparison was buffed to the max possibile (left and right hand of the soul king+ her power+ fullbring pieces at the end). now that i talked about "idk why the tile buff ichigo but he is a side ch" the story itself is very good and creative with a little romance subplot (very little to the point of no existence, to the point that at the end you will think "is he abondoning everyone?") and is 4.4 total score but not more than this, even if i liked the story itself the fact that at ch 106 was the zanpakuto rebellion arc but at ch 107 it was skipped entirely the fact that charapters are missing is itself a missing star in story dev, and the fact that the author dont explain at the end the romance part of the story is another missing star in story dev and ch design if not for that it wold have been 5 star(if you ignore the title of the story like i did).

Saving Masaki is a Brainless logic move... (Masaki is Ichigo's mom that was killed by a hollow as Ichigo was younger) And I almost had hope for your novel