the fourth state of matter an introduction to the physics of plasma

Not great nor terrible. As per usual with Chinese fics, the author makes zero effort to proofread the mechanics of the original setting while also demonstrating quite a bit of a lack of knowledge about things in general. The best example is the fact that he gave the MC a Transmutation-type Nen and made a Nen Ability to transform the state of matter of other objects in the world. In a way, he equated Transmutation as transforming anything with aura when, in fact, it is just transforming aura into anything. Another example is the MC going on a full rant about how he discovered the proper way to use Transmutation by changing the state of matter and clowning on Killua for only using lightning, completely ignoring the fact that plasma is also a state of matter. Overall a decent read if you don't mind turning your brain off for a few hours

You should probably write more about her mental state and describe her physics more. How she looks like, and so on. And the physics of the other characters you’re adding into the story along with what surrounds them, description of the background.

Character development is great. Comic book physics are followed and characters are not Too OP either. All around enjoyable read. Introduction is a good hook.

I hate books like this. It doesn’t matter, we already know he makes it to the Fourth Great War, and we also know he’s OP. This buildup is just stupid.

Amazing work of you continuation if Adam does get turned into a vampire a substitute for blood that might work could be plasma since I remember from a a Justice league animated movie Kirk langstorm Athena Batman of that world was turn into a vampire by bat venom and he used plasma as a substitute for blood