all the little houses

Update is a little slow this few days coz author is moving houses. But nevertheless, I’m staying patience and will continue to stick with this novel because it is worth the wait. Kampatè Moonbath!

The story has many layers, and is engaging. The heroine is not all pure, but this brings her depth. The hero is a little stiff at this point, but that may change when the two characters interact more. The author put in a lot of time to describe the city, village, houses, and people. It reads like a tv show worthy story.

Hello Write, Your writing is really good, and I like the story and how you manage to give equal importance to all the houses.

Cornbringer is the greatest.Lol.so good. Cant wait to see the reactions of other houses. Cornbringer is the greatest.Lol.so good. Cant wait to see the reactions of other houses.Cornbringer is the greatest.Lol.so good. Cant wait to see the reactions of other houses.

I approve, The houses you chose while overpowered luckily you didn't add pendraon, gryffindor, ravenclaw, or a bunch of other random houses, tho you could get away with adding gryffindor, so far the plot is progressing nicely. If you want some added filler flavor text would help a lot with bulking up the word count and stuff, along with slowing down the progress of the story a little since it seems like your rushing a little by leaving out some useless details that are normally in novels and fanfics. Overall looking good and i'm excited to see how it continues.