mugiwara wallpaper

I love the power of the MC, he doesn't only follow the path of the mugiwara, the fic is well written. Sorry for the english or the weird review I'm not good at it

Just a hint you may want to put a wallpaper on the cover of the story otherwise not many people want to have a look at it. here. not putting on the wallpaper makes people think you're not a good writer and most of the time these kinds of story's will discontinue around 10 chapter

I really like this fic. The others fic with a female protagonist on this page did not attract me for a long time, but I read this one completely. As a critic, I know that you avoid Cherry getting too involved in the arcs to promote the growth of the Mugiwara and avoid repeating so many scenes from the canon, but as a result of that Cherry feels a bit out of the crew, more like a teacher watching over them than a partner. I know the Mugiwara don't feel that way about all the time they spend together on the ship, but since you don't write many of those moments, it feels that way to me. I would recommend a little more Slice of Life ish, one-on-one talks, hobbies, so we can see the relationship he has with each Mugiwara beyond fighting or teaching.

how do I receive my wallpaper after buying 30 chapters in advance from the win-win privilege stuff. also I do want to say this book is really good I'm just looking for my wallpaper after spending enough coins to receive 30 advanced chapters

Great story .wallpaper is so cool .keep up the great writing.@-@ $-$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$%%%%%%%%%$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$%%$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ idonthave many words.*-**-**-*