carolyn faulkner

So hard to find a story like this but i wonder why the author like to fuckin drag battles to 5 to 10 chapters(so 😡 mad). And all I hope is that mc slaps that bitch of carolyn right in the face by proving that shes wrong and if you do read the review i pray author like the battles please make carolyn regrets chapters long!!

I'm Carolyn from Nigeria in West Africa. I was curious when I downloaded phicool books during the covid 19 lock down. I checked through the list of books and was fascinated by the storyline of this novel. As soon as I started I was captivated. Sometimes I can't keep the book away. I got to chapter 385 and can't unlock any further pages. How much will I pay for the whole book? It's a lovely novel so far but I'll love to access the whole copy. Great job!

This story is entertaining, I like the way the protagonist lives, how the story evolves to form his own Economic Empire, but it is confusing how much information about specific details about money🤑🤑 (box office figures although it is fiction and it does not bother me much), the development of other characters that surround him family, friends and those of filler there are many gaps. ⚠️ Disclosure Warning⚠️: 😰😰😰😰😰😱😱😱😱😱 I would also like q That the author will continue developing the story about Robert (the spy), the Wilson family, Olivia (his mother the renegade), Carolyn (the rebel), the twins and some of the women who escaped him 😁😁, the entrance to the century XXI (It would be quite interesting) and the fourth technological revolution In short, the end is quite confusing and I protest. 💣💣💣💥💥💥🔥🔥🔥 👍👍👍👍👍

The writing style is highly polished, and I can infer that the author based it off of more traditional novel styles. The method applied by the author in which they developed the world, plot, and character archetypes alludes to styles utilized by Tolkein, Faulkner, Austen, etc. Easy to comprehend, and there isn't a stress of dialogue. The presence of multiple main characters is interesting, and they're represented well. From what I'm reading, the characters are mostly reticent and not very outspoken, which is well complemented by the lack of direct statements of speech and thoughts, rather revealing their actions to implicitly display them instead. However, dialogue is indeed present in the latter portions of the novel. That it isn't abused or placed as the central component of the novel, is a refreshing find. The emphasis on worldbuilding in the prologue could be stretched over the first few chapters. However, it's still a good read nonetheless. Compared to the other novels in this database with their overemphasized, dramatic explosion of a beginning, this novel with a slow, more relaxed and indirect development of the plot is truly an interesting and refreshing find.

the story has good writing quality, i.e. adequate descriptive passage, consistent paragraph structure and the overall flow is mostly okay. The story development is pretty jarring, things just tend to happen immediately with very little build up. For example learning magic; I understand there's a plot relevant reason he can learn it fast but it's barely delved into and he learns in the span of seconds. To me this is infuriating as even explaining a little bit more how he's leaning the magic would've helped to understand what's going on. Another significant point relating to sorry development is there's no over arching plot after 50 chapters. One could argue that the over arching plot is the MC's desire to live comfortably but in my opinion that seems more like a character's ambition and does not provide the driving force needed for.an over arching plot. Moving onwards to character design, Staring off with the MC, we are introduced to a 'chill' main character who embodies stoicism. However immediately after he is reborn he becomes a work alcoholic, there was not enough build/character reasoning for such a massive change. The MC struggles with nothing, not even convincing older characters that they should listen to a small child. This is explained away by his genius but who in right mind takes a small child's advice with even thinking it over. There is little personal growth in the MC over the 50 chapters I read. In regards to other characters they need actual personalities, and lives. I have no clue about what the MC's parents, employee etc lives are like. There were no introductions of support charges in the first 50 chapters. In regards to update stability, keep up the grind I wish I could write as fast as you gosh damn. Lastly the world background, I had and I mean 0 idea of what the outside of the MCs home/garden looked like before chapter 40 something and EVEN THEN there was no full description of the city the outlying landscape, don't know what the architecture looks like, I don't know what the people look like, white black yellow pink orange I have no clue. it's infuriating because these little things were described pretty well in the MC's house/garden. It might sound nit picky but these small things help the reader follow the story. In conclusion, this started off so well and there is massive potential for the story but as it progresses small things start to slip slowly leading to a cascade of confusion between the reader and the story. Please do not take my frustration as a personal attack, everyone has to start writing somewhere. As William Faulkner wisely says. "Get it down. Take chances. It may be bad, but it's the only way you can do anything really good."