[Quick Wear: Lord God, don't tease me.]
As one of the four managers of the 3,000 Sectors, Tang Xingmi didn't expect that one day, Ming Qi, the villain Demon Lord in one of the planes in the Immortal Demon Realm, was about to destroy the entire plane. It was all the host's fault for courting death. If the world was destroyed, the order of the 3,000 Sectors would be disrupted, and the other worlds would also be affected or even collapse…Tang Xingmi found three other companions, but they were helpless. The three heartless comrades had asked her to seek help from the Lord, but she had no choice but to go now…
The Sovereign didn't say much. He looked at her leisurely and frowned. Then, he entered that plane. Miraculously, the entire world had returned to three months ago. The three thousand worlds had stabilized, but the Sovereign hadn't returned. What was going on?
The system's meatball who had caused trouble turned into a three or four-year-old child and slipped in front of Tang Xingmi in fear. He really couldn't get angry at this bun. Fortunately, he still knew how to kill that courting host. Otherwise, he would really be angered to death.
"Supervisor Tang, the Divine Lord's soul has dispersed into the three thousand Sectors. For this incident…"
"What? Then what should we do?"
"That's simple too. The Sovereign said that you want to save him personally, collect his divine soul, and let him be reborn!"
Tang Xingmi was in a difficult position. It was indeed her fault. She had to take the blame.
"How do we save him?"
"Bind to the system. Attack the villain and eliminate the Darkening Points. Your favorability will reach 100. Once you complete it, you will receive a wisp of the Lord God's soul."
Dumbfounded.“What ???”
Ding ~~~ The system binding to the villain boss has been successful!
Damn it…
baru kali ini aku suka dengan kualitas tulisanmu. berasa profesional pembawaannya dan gak main-main. sayangnya, gak diimbangi dengan plot. memang karakter arsen bagus dalam segi pembawaannya. tapi alurnya sudah ketebak lantaran ngasih spoiler di sinopsis. jadi gak perlu langsung masuk ke dalam, endingnya sudah diterka. ada kalanya, sinopsis jangan mengandung spoiler atau batasi saja minimal 2-3 paragraf. seenggaknya pembaca jadi penasaran. kedua, deskripsi tiap karakter terlalu kaku. sama persis dengan sinopsis. ini gak boleh karena pembaca romance itu lebih suka mendeskripsikan secara detail. contoh kayak scene kasino. itu sudah bagus. tapi kenapa karakter di sini malah cenderung simpel? ini jadi PR buatmu nanti untuk merevisinya. kuharap kau terus semangat dalam menulis dan jangan down karena kritikan. aku yakin, cerita yang kau suguhkan bagus. hanya saja, plot dan karakter perlu diperdalam jika fokus romance.