bagaimana menghindari plot lebih besar pasak daripada tiang dalam menulis

Perkawinan Paling Indah dalam Sejarah : Istri Manja Tuan Mu

“Nyonya, saatnya kamu melakukan tugasmu!” Mu Yuchen memerintah Xi Xiaye sambil menarik pinggangnya dan mendekat erat dalam pelukannya. --- Sebuah pesta yang sudah direncanakan dengan matang untuk sang penguasa. Tunangannya sudah bertekuk lutut dan malah melamar kakak perempuannya. Merasa terampok hak-hak warisannya, ia telah mempersiapkan pembalasan dendam kepada keluarga Xi. Saat ia menghindari keluarga yang telah mengkhianatinya, dia menemukan – Mu Yuchen, lelaki sederhana, sopan dan baik hati yang memerintah Kota Z dan memimpin Korporasi Glory World. “Mu Yuchen, mari kita menikah!” Sang lelaki melihatnya dan lalu berdiri. “Mau kemana kamu?” “Ayo. Sebentar lagi kantor KUA akan segera tutup”

Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin · Urban

When the plot-skips players into the game world

During the demon-summoning ceremony, Aiwass finally recalled his past life's memories. This should be an online game that his family's company had released and operated for six years. Now, his foster father was the leader of the latest version's antagonist organization. He would expose his identity six years later, hesitate and then defect from the protagonist's side. Ultimately, because he decided to take a fatal strike meant for the player character, he was killed by his upright older brother in a transitional CG without even a chance to enter the main content. ——But the problem was not too significant. Aiwass also knew many secret advancement routes exclusive to the player character, as well as the Nurturing Secret Sequel regulations of the various Paths. He believed he could reverse his unfortunate fate…… So now there was only one issue left. "According to the original plot, shouldn't I have been rescued by the protagonist before this lousy ceremony even began?" Tied to the ceremonial altar as a sacrifice, Aiwass fell into contemplation. —————— Keywords: Victorian Fantasy, Amber Flow

Not praying for ten strings · Urban

Dicintai oleh Pria yang Lebih Tua

Hadiah pertunangannya adalah dua juta dolar, tak kurang sepeser pun. Jiang Yu sudah berusia delapan belas tahun dan bisa menikah sekarang. Kirim uangnya ke kartuku, dan urusan ini selesai!" Jiang Yu melihat ibunya yang terus-menerus berbicara di meja negosiasi. Dia menyaksikan ibunya menetapkan harga saat menjual Jiang Yu. Jiang Yu tidak percaya. Delapan belas tahun yang lalu, mereka membawa bayi yang salah pulang dari rumah sakit, dan Jiang Yu, putri asli dari keluarga kaya, berakhir di panti asuhan hingga setahun yang lalu. Jiang Ran, putri palsu dari keluarga Jiang, tumbuh dengan sendok perak di mulutnya. Dengan sumber daya yang lebih unggul sejak muda, dia lebih menonjol dari Jiang Yu dalam segala aspek dan menjadi kebanggaan keluarga Jiang. Jiang Yu, yang sebagian besar waktunya berkeliaran di dunia luar, tidak lebih dari seorang gadis desa yang membuat ibunya menjadi bahan tertawaan di lingkaran sosialita. Namun, Jiang Yu sama sekali tidak tahu betapa besarnya kebencian ibunya padanya. Pada hari dia berusia delapan belas, ibunya 'menjual' dia dengan harga yang ditetapkan. Jiang Yu berkata, "Jika Anda ingin menikahkan putri Anda dengan orang lain, seharusnya itu adalah Jiang Ran. Saya ini putri Anda yang sebenarnya. Anda yang secara keliru membawa Jiang Ran pulang!" Ibunya menjawab, "Diam. Aku berharap aku tidak pernah melahirkanmu. Kamu hanya membawa aib bagi saya!" Jiang Ran berkata, "Kakak, semua yang dilakukan Ibu adalah untuk kebaikanmu. Jangan salahkan Ibu." Ibunya berkata, "Aku yakin dia tidak lebih dari penagih utang yang datang untuk menagih hutangnya padaku! Entah kamu memberiku dua juta dolar, atau kamu menikah dengan patuh!" Jiang Yu meninggalkan rumah dalam keputusasaan. Dengan paduan kebetulan yang aneh, dia tanpa sengaja menikahi seorang CEO. Sejak saat itu, pria berusia tiga puluh tahun itu memanjakan istrinya yang berusia delapan belas tahun sampai ke langit-langit. Gadis kecil itu berkata, "Tuan, ada orang yang mengganggu istri Anda!" Sang pria, "Si bodoh tak kompeten mana yang begitu buta hingga berani mengganggu kamu?"

Mountain Springs · General

Saya Punya 108 Kakak Perempuan yang Lebih Tua

"Keluarga Yu Tian yang tersisa, adik perempuannya, didiagnosis menderita leukemia, dan mereka membutuhkan 2 juta untuk transplantasi sumsum tulang." Tidak ada cara saudara yang miskin itu bisa membiayai itu. Sesaat setelah Yu Tian hancur, Lamborghini merah berhenti di depannya. Wanita berkacamata hitam yang keluar dari kendaraan mewah itu memberi tahu Yu Tian bahwa dia adalah kakak perempuan yang lama hilang. Kemudian dia mentransfer 3 juta untuk mengatasi masalahnya saat ini. "Ayo. Kembali dengan saya. Semua kakak perempuan Anda sangat ingin bertemu dengan Anda." "Um... saya punya berapa banyak kakak perempuan?" "Kenapa tidak Anda tebak?" "Dua? Mungkin tiga? Tidak mungkin saya punya tujuh atau delapan kakak perempuan, kan?" Wanita itu menggelengkan jarinya dan tersenyum. "Termasuk saya, Anda memiliki 108 kakak perempuan." Mata Yu Tian terbelalak."

Sixth Master Of Eastern Mountain · Urban

Penyihir Darah: Pasangan Succubus dalam Kiamat

Mana legendaris akhirnya mencapai planet Bumi, menyebabkan semua makhluk hidup secara resmi memasuki jalur evolusi. Hewan-hewan berubah menjadi binatang buas yang menakutkan, beberapa tanaman mendapatkan kesadaran diri, dan manusia yang berhasil menahan gelombang mana terbangun dengan kemampuan untuk memperoleh keterampilan dengan mengalahkan musuh yang kuat. Seluruh planet memasuki era baru di mana hukum lama runtuh. Satu-satunya hukum adalah hukum rimba di mana yang terkuat memangsa yang terlemah. Bai Zemin, seorang mahasiswa yang tampaknya biasa saja, ternyata adalah jenius dalam jalur sihir yang tak tertandingi. Ini menarik perhatian seorang iblis cantik yang akan menjadi mitranya dalam perjalanan menuju puncak mutlak. Tuhan, Malaikat, Iblis, Naga, Vampir, Manusia Serigala; tidak ada keberadaan yang layak menjadi musuhnya!

XIETIAN · Fantasy

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