more threat

Introduction of the characters are well made and themselves also.Story developing is also good.The typical romance story of University but with a little bit changes of own is good.But i recommend the Author to describe the appearance of characters.It's not a big threat but I think Author should use more words in all indivisual chapters. But it's a minor threat or even it isn't a threat so everyone have their own style.Overall work is good and it's still grow more.

Will he practice feudalism or centralisation?? As centralisation will give the country more power to face outside threat

elias is very well written and rising level of threat make it look more cool. i loved your novel,keep it up

There is nothing marvel about this other than the names Hammer and Roxxon. The story boils down to a loop of threat->buy some company->laugh at the threat-> new threat in the next chapter. And even after all that the MC gets nowhere, has no goals. Plus it is written with the "HELP" of A.I. Basically the author wrote a prompt

Luminous is my favorite female character of that franchise. I hope she will become more powerfull in the next light novel to keep up with future threat like feldway.