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System's POV
Author: Elyon
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"What you do in life, Echoes in Eternity." The System, who goes by the code name, Thirteen, defied the System God in order to give his previous Hosts’ the chance to change their Fates. Unfortunately, he was killed by his Father, the System God, and was sent to the world of Pangea to struggle like the Cannon Fodders that he fought so hard to protect. Armed with his knowledge as a System, Thirteen vowed to change not only his Fate, but the Fate of others whose destinies were tied up with him. In a world torn by power and corruption, a fallen System will bring out a symphony of change, or lead it to its destruction. ---------------- Join me in Discord: https://discord.gg/UesrNGmKWz
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THE VILLAIN'S POV

"When you think everything is going well, the world will flip you the middle finger." __ A successful author. After living an ideal life ... a loving family, amazing friends, a stable job, and a bestselling novel that made his name known across the world .. he suddenly finds himself reincarnated inside his own story, written by his very hands. And worst of all... inside the body of the weakest villain ... Frey. A third-rate villain doomed to die in the earliest chapters. A worthless scumbag with trash talent ... hated by every other character in the story, with no redemption in sight. But he refuses that fate. He rejects the entire world. This author doesn't need the cliché of a second chance — he already lived the life he always wanted. "Spare me the second chance nonsense. One chance was enough. I’m the one who created this world… and I’ll be the one to destroy it if I have to. I will return — to my world… my family… my life. No matter the cost." Driven by a burning desire to return home, Frey begins his journey through a merciless world, one where his fate has already been written by godlike beings. And as if the world hadn’t played enough cruel tricks on him, it granted him a strange system .. one that toyed with him endlessly. Complete knowledge of every event in the novel, and the ability to create any talent or power he wished. They seemed like overwhelming gifts... but were they truly? how far can he go… and what will become of the world he once created? ... ... discord: https://discord.gg/uNrXRgS3Xb

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Defy The Alpha(s)

Two centuries after the Great War, peace between humans and werewolves was finally achieved, or so everyone believes. Werewolves reign like gods, and humans remain blissfully unaware of their true place in the new world order. To maintain this fragile balance, each year, a handful of "lucky" humans are selected from various districts to attend Lunaris Academy, a prestigious institution that promises glory, status, and a chance to mingle with the elite. Those chosen are hailed as the lucky few, destined to marry powerful alphas and rise as luna. This year, Violet Purple is among the chosen, much to everyone's surprise. For an orphaned girl adopted by a disgraced prostitute, this is a golden ticket to a better life or so she's told. But Lunaris Academy isn’t the paradise it’s painted to be. Everything Violet and her fellow humans have been taught is a lie. Humans are far from equal; they're pawns in a much larger game. The academy is nothing but a gilded cage, and the students are lambs led to slaughter, playthings for the alphas to toy with in their ruthless games. To make matters worse, Violet catches the attention of the most dangerous players in this game, the Terror Four: the Alpha of the North, Alpha of the South, Alpha of the East, and Alpha of the West. Each one is more dangerous, more twisted, and more powerful than the last. But even among themselves, the alphas are divided, each with their own deadly ambitions. Yet, they all have their eyes on her. They expect Violet to play along, to fall in line like the others who worship at their feet, to break under their games. But Violet isn’t like the others. She refuses to bow. She’ll defy them all.

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Story development or Plot(4.7⭐) : The story was definitely wholesome and interesting especially for the MC to interact to the characters show, and the author really did a good job for the transition of MC being on the story. Updating stability(4.9⭐): The update stability was good and I can see the author are learning and taking the readers suggestions in the chapters comment... Writing quality (3.9⭐): The writing kind of feel lazy at times (No offense author), How do I describe it? I mean, in some or most chapters, a whole chapter are just built upon a dialogue, similar to scripts, however, novel isn't a script. For example, [Character Name] and the character line next to it. Like this; Ryan - "Input sentence here". It's not really that bad in some cases, however for the people who didn't watch the show may or may not be able to get it and will get confused of some chapters. Like how Claire wants Luke to put something on, but since it's just a dialogue without a character expression, action or background (What's happening in the Background) description, some readers who didn't watch the show will get confused and wonder what's she wants for Luke to put on? And also by how Phil are secretly inappropriately touching Gloria when he was stopping her fight against Dede, and in this novel, most of the chapters are just a character name and a line next to it, without adding that comedic moment and the characters expression when Dylan sang a ridiculous hormone song or when Ryan sang a song that should let the characters have a respective POV and should feel a goosebumps and awestruck, however, author only writing about how the characters are tearing up a little bit but don't include how they are really feeling in depth, and instead only how the characters are chill about it and suggest to him that he sing it in a studio like that's a normal thing that Ryan just sang an impressive song, I mean, even though they are the Main Characters of the show, it doesn't mean that they aren't normal people, they are just a entertaining, funny and just like any ordinary family, they have misunderstanding of their own and solve their problems as a family so a song of Ryan should give them an awestruck expression like how they are dumbfounded when they hear Dylan song, if you watch the show though, too bad author just skips that funny part, anyways, atleast write about other characters POV, for example Alex, and how she really feels about Ryan and what is her thoughts about Ryan, about his genius mind and being a young entrepreneur, how cool he was to her and how Haley are envious of Alex and her POV and other characters such as Phil, for example: when he saw Ryan and he secretly though when he sees Ryan 'A snitch, A smarty pants, Ryan' and what other characters thoughts about Ryan and also even if it's unrelated to Ryan, it will definitely be a lot interesting to know about their POV about their partners or their family and what they are really feeling, especially with an addition of Ryan, it will not only make the story more alive but also will definitely be a refreshing change for the author and the readers. I'm not saying for the author to make it complicated, but I just feel that the author can improve and even he described the situation in a simple sentence and Characters funny expression, and also with other characters POV, especially what's their POV when they are finally reading Ryan's book and also write Ryan's book impressive scene when they're reading it or their reaction when they're watching Ryan's movie or series in detail. Besides that, everything's good, plot is good, I like the fanfic except it's lacking in what I mentioned above. Character design (3.0 ⭐): except for the characters of the show, the author chose to not give the OC's like Ryan's parents, especially his mom an appearance. I mean the appearance, her looks. What she looks like. And other oc characters looks, I don't have problem with the show characters not have a description in appearance since it's all good and we can Google it, however, an oc especially the agents or big six representative, atleast write they're wearing and what's their hair color, not important to be honest. So if the author doesn't want to, it's all good 👍. World background (4.9 ⭐): Well, obviously, the world background is in Modern Family and also similar to 'My Hollywood System' that's the world lacking in entertainment department, and with it is the convenience of the MC's knowledge of his past life and the system. It's a perfect world for opportunist. Overall rating: 4.4 ⭐

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Is it effective to use multiple POV in one POV novel?
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2024-11-10 09:44
Yes, it can be effective. Using multiple POVs in a so - called 'one POV novel' can add depth and complexity. It allows the reader to see different aspects of the story and gain a more comprehensive understanding. For example, in a mystery novel, the main POV might be the detective, but by adding the POV of a suspect or a witness, new clues and perspectives can be introduced.
What are the challenges of using multiple POV in one POV novel?
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2024-11-10 11:11
One challenge is maintaining consistency. Since it's supposed to be a 'one POV' novel, adding multiple POVs might make the overall tone or voice of the novel seem disjointed. Another challenge is ensuring that each POV adds value. If not done right, some POVs might feel like unnecessary fillers.
What is pov fiction?
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2024-11-12 16:47
POV fiction stands for 'point - of - view' fiction. It's a type of storytelling where the narrative is presented from a particular character's perspective. For example, in 'The Catcher in the Rye', the whole story is told from Holden Caulfield's POV. This allows readers to get a deep understanding of the character's thoughts, feelings, and experiences.
What is POV in a story?
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2024-10-16 07:39
POV stands for Point of View. It's how the story is told from the perspective of a particular character or narrator.
What is an extras pov novel?
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An extras pov novel is a type of novel that is written from the perspective of an 'extra' character. In many stories, there are main characters who drive the plot forward. But an 'extra' is someone on the periphery. In this kind of novel, we get to see the story through their eyes. It can offer a unique view of the story's world, events, and other characters. For example, in a fantasy epic about a hero's journey, an extra could be a peasant who witnesses the hero's passing through their village. Their pov might focus on how the hero's actions impact the simple life of the village rather than the grand battles and magic that the hero experiences.
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