one major mistake and all ends

it could become the best if not for the author lazyness . there are lot of mistake that author maked ... the first and foremost one that author don't show the level up stats of this system.... second MC killed the org but still Didint level up.... 3rd one is MC is stupid.... and major one of the mistake is that author make the MC look stupid man who follow the principal of the good return with good where it is should be all man for him self.... and MC don't kill anyone thats also one of the big major mistake... you have to kill them who try to kill you .. otherwise what are you leaving in the old age of swords where you don't know anything.... lol that's all the logic author don't make it that's why some people honesty answer is garbage... and I will say the same garbage

there's one major recurring mistake that brakes comprehension - and thus, Immersion - that the author need to be made aware of: planetary systems are not galaxies. other than that the narrative is involving. I read all today. hope it goes forward, and for the author to improve his writing (specifically the "galaxy" thing)

Really great story. Good flow and translation quality, some parts that should be a major part are glossed over. MC literally has not made one mistake at all and I am 800+ chapters in. There are currently 200+ locked chapters (8 stone cost no ads) so do not expect to read through all the chapters anytime soon.

This a story about a girl who's family tries to frame her after her cheating father's mistress kills her mom. She ends up having a one night stand with a stranger and ends up pregnant. However, the plot has a major twist after the one night stand.

It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter.It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter. It's a common mistake from the author not have a complete chapter. He haphazardly ends a chapter, so we are not able to connect it with other chapter. Not to mention his idea of adding new stories in every second chapter.