say hello to the locals

It’s good, but at the start a lot of things are unclear. The whole ‘death battle’ background isn’t well defined at first, and it never directly clarified that there are locals and death battlers as different groups in the story, so at first it’s hard to understand why the locals are so unprepared and lacking of basic knowledge.

peak writing, keep it up! would love to see more interactions btwn the locals and the army

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I see so much potential on this story ahm... I forgot what i say next to add up word requirements ahmm... Amma just say alot of hello's again :3 Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello Hello

Its safe to say the author of this novel is one of the victim of the 1998 in indonesia. Cuz the way he potrays the locals there is so much worst than the other countries the mc goes. The author is a lolicon definitly even if he introduce some other mature ladies to the mc..still the way he describes the appearance of them " lolis" is way much more devine then the other "ladies"