one word stops it all

After about 22 chapters author stops caring about keeping character names correct. Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count

Barely readable. Who is the editor? Almost like google translate. For example, the translator translates a consumable item as ' consumed with times of usage ' NANI Alot of word dumps, author is apparently too lazy to make it part of the story. Literally stops the story mid way to explain the background details. Alot of potential but all these problems stops me from giving a high rating.

Book is good with great background and story line. But after I think 400 or 500 chapter all the chapters are being divided in 4 parts with all 4 having almost same content. At this point they are increasing word and chapter count. Hopefully this stops or this just waste of coins on same content on different chapter.

This is one of the best novels on this app in fact I’d probably go as far as to say the best, chapter after chapter page after page sentence after sentence word after word it never stops you from wanting to read it truly is an amazingly written, structured, and thought novel and it makes you never want to stop reading.

My word.. A remarkable effort. The gigantic walls of text. Might want to break up some of the bigger text blocks for more reading clarity. Can't sometimes understand when one character stops speaking and another one starts. But for all it's faults, it's still an enjoyable read. And clearly you have a lot of plans and stuff left to write. Improvement comes with time, just keep on writing 👍