growing distant

This sounded like an interesting one, so far so good. Well developed background and storyline although getting to be a bit repetitive about reincarnation from the distant past. Also, tends to repeat a lot of the characters descriptions over and over rather then expanding or growing the character more.

Jack is becoming a better man because of Eva. He feels accepted, loved and emotionally free to express himself after a very long time. His growing up years wasn't filled with love, either from family or acquaintances. This led to him being distant, emotionless and a lone wolf and thinking he doesn't deserve love. But knowing Eva for less than a week, a has gotten more than he ever expected and more, knowing people care about him genieuly .

very good premise and characters. i also like the setting of it being in a distant future. keep it up!

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He chose this distant place because other places were too expensive, but the main reason was that this place was in an old private house, and when Ye Mo rented the old house, he had paid for two year’s rent. There was a yard in the back of the house where he could grow Silver Heart Grass which was exactly what Ye Mo wanted. For him, business came after growing the Silver Heart Grass. However, the third day that the clinic had opened, they had their first patient when they least expected. Ye Mo and Yu Erhu were awoken by a hurried knock in the middle of the night.