rudy farias story

this fanfic setting is quite cool. having a new MC as rudy brother is indeed a genius stroke! i'm curious how they grow their relationship in the future. though i have one thing which really bug me tho that is the way narratives keep breaking third wall. if only the story is told like how the original book avoid mentioning other literature too much! also arthur is a man who read mushoku tensei is a fatal flaw. that means that rudy and the whole world is a fictional character made up book writer. how do you solve that fact in the future? what if the original mushoku tensei turn out the world where rudy lives is actually alternate world? what about the god/beings who incarnate rudy? its become overly complicated and nonsensical. arthur should be a man cam from the same earth where pre-reincarnated rudy lived. but i guess it doesnt matter since the book is abandoned anyway

Love how you gave Rein an actual personality this time instead of your previous work. I do hope you take time to explore Rein's and Rudy's relationship as reincarnated twins. I do have 1 request have Rudy get all of his original harem members. Slyph, Roxy and Eris were important for Rudy's development. If you are going to give Rein a harem can please use girls that don't get enough spotlight.

Great story first of all, binge it on one day and I love the overall direction of where the story is going. Rudy is not a pedophile like the original, infact he takes some qualities of 'masochist'(concerning) and a chad.

This is a good story but needs grammar and word use editing. Plus where are the photos mentioned in the text and why does the POV keep changing when it's Rudy's life that is the main focus of the novel.

I like where this is going, the story so far is good, and I love that the MC doesn't hate Rudy, everything is going good so far and I hope it stays good and consistent like this