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Mushoku Tensei: Reinhard Greyrat
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Mushoku Tensei: Reinhard Greyrat

Rudeus_GreyratRoxy

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What is Mushoku Tensei: Reinhard Greyrat

Mushoku Tensei: Reinhard Greyrat is a popular fanfic written by the author Rudeus_GreyratRoxy, covering REINCARNATION, OPISHMC, SLICEOFALIFE, SLOWPACE, Anime & Comics genres. It's viewed by 1M readers with an average rating of 4.54/5 and 43 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 41 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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(English is not my main language...) (I only write whatever is on my mind in this) Reinhard Greyrat, Little twin brother of Rudeus Greyrat is also a reincarnated person from Earth. But unlike Rudeus with overwhelming talent in Magic, Reinhard had an overwhelming talent in Swordsmanship. Faced with his new family, he will relive his life once again! And live his life to the fullest!

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lJeDl
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[ Fanfic Connoisseur [lJeDl] Reports: Currently on chapter 5 and I would say that it has a promising start and not like those shitty wish fulfillment fanfic that has an overpowered system. I also have a recommendation and that is to not add any system or different type of power that is not from mushoku tensei. because almost every shitty fanfics I've seen had another power from a different world, so it would be nice to see an Mc that only uses powers that are in the mushoku tensei world, better yet maybe he can create his own sword style in the future or something. Keep up the good work author-san!

Rudeus_GreyratRoxy
Rudeus_GreyratRoxyAuthorRudeus_GreyratRoxy

Hello there... As per tradition Author's should write Reviews right?😂 Oh well, I don't really have anything to say. Just read and comment your thoughts..

SCP_0999
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Im my opinion I think you should removed the original mc Rudeus. You can't had two kings living in one mountain. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////

DavidBr
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The story started well but after a while you realize if you take out the MC the story remains the same as the original Dddddddddddddddddffffffffdddddddddfffgfyhhgfrggwtnwfnwtwt hj RS ytwnetjqfnqtnfj ta jwttjywk tjefbfbbnbmn

Carrottop
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First let's talk about the good parts of the story. The author's grammar is good enough for this site, just some minor mistakes that do not detract you from enjoying this story. The chapters are updated with a decent pace(1-2 per week), with the occasional mini-hiatus of about 3 weeks at the longest. The world background is based on the novel, although the author has taken some liberties here and there that still fit into the original story and its feel pretty well. At the very least, as of chapter 31 there have been no significant changes that makes this story unbelievable. Now comes the bad portions. The story started off decent, following the novel's storyline and history with a decent pace and no large time skips that would ruin the story's progression. Then the author decided to add some exaggerations here and there, some unexplainable OP healing logic that the MC does not have any prior knowledge for to be justifiable, and the occasional overblown personality of original characters that are fairly noticeable and overall annoying to any reader that has read the entire novel series. (WARNING: SPOILERS) An finally we get to the worst part of this fanfic, as of chapter 31, which is the character design. It looks like the MC's IQ and maturity as someone who is over 20 years old mentally is inversely proportional with his fighting skills....You can't justify the lack of forethought and mindboggling level of cringe/edginess in his thought process or speech just by saying that his pre**** body is affecting his mind or that being a pervert "runs in the family". The level at which this is being shown is unrealistic. I have personally never met anyone over 10 years old who has such an unrealistic view of the world or who hasn't grown out of their chunibyo syndrome at that age. He was born in that world, and yet he is LESS mature than the kids that were never reborn! Heck, if you told me that he has a mental disorder that is limiting him mentally somehow then it would make more sense than whatever dialogue is being shown here. This fanfic started off well enough, with an understandable thought process from the MC, and then as soon as the MC started training or got a girlfriend, it's like he devolved into a glorified primate with an overblown ego the size of Mt Everest. I was never a fan of Rudeus in the novel, but how it THAT clown, who was a former trash NEET with mental scars(if you can even call them that), more mature then someone who was supposedly at least a semi-functioning ***** before dying? Author, please, don't ruin this fanfic with subpar dialogue. A good rule of thumb is, if you can't imagine someone saying something in real life without hiding their face in utter shame, or you saying it in front of a crowd, then it probably shouldn't be written down, otherwise it will degrade your character. Your benchmark is not to be worse than Rudeus, a goal that should be realistically achievable even if you were writing this fanfic drunk, with your feet, after Google translating a non-native speaker 5 times retelling you a cliff notes version of Rudeus's personality. My recommendation is to fix the MC's personality in the later chapters, if you don't want to change to earlier chapters, or your fanfic will drop faster down the rankings than a boulder falling from the aforementioned Mt Everest.

LeeZanda
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sigh... ..........

Beautiful_Squid
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In many ways, the work of a reader is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we readers must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a reader truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the *new*. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. This morning, I experienced something new: an extraordinary story from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the story and its author have challenged my preconceptions about fine writting is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for my Teacher's famous motto, "Anyone can write." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist *can* come from *anywhere*. It is difficult to imagine more humble origins than those of the genius now writing at Webnovel, who is, in this reader's opinion, nothing less than one of the finest author in this app. I will be returning to this story soon, hungry for more.

_Medeiros
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honestly i think a good story i just don't like some decisions of the MC i really hoped the story would be different from the original but so far outside the presence of the MC nothing has changed what a disappointment

kevin_saputra
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this is good better than the previous one where the MC behaves too Chuuni but still cool to me, but this MC is cooler not just a copy of the other characters but more original and the story development is more interesting with the interaction between MC and Paul. I hope the writer continues the story.

crimson_king_5044
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author thank you for this work I am on chapter 25 in mushoku tense but I like swords more then magic so thank you for this 154

nethatar
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5/5 Writing Quality: It's pretty easy to read, so good job! Hopefully you keep this up. 5/5 Stability of Updates: While this is a new story, you have been updating daily, so keep it up, but focus on quality more than quantity! 4/5 Story Development: So far the story is in the early stages but I like it so far, pretty good start so keep it up. 4/5 Character Design: I can't give 5 stars simply because this isn't an original story and most of the characters will be those from the actual story, but I do like the MC/OC you made. 4/5 World Background: Again, can't give you 5 stars simply because it's an already made world and isn't original, but I do want to see what you do with it. -- I haven't watched the anime or read the manga, but so far you've got me hooked! Can't wait to see more of this story, I do hope that you don't do something stupid like cucking the MC or making him a beta male, since that shouldn't happen, especially considering his past life, I do hope you can make his personality something like, when he gets mad, instead of acting out, he can use it as his strength, and control it.

Shame_ManofDao
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Hope he gains Imortality because....SPOILER................. .................. .............................. .......................... .........OG MC from Mushoku Tensei Died from Old Age.😭

Clown_Of_God
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Good novel but the harem spoil....that's it aUHSUAhsuaHSUHAuhsuHASHSUahsuHASUHAuhsuaHSHUAhsuhaUSHUAhsuhaUSHUAhsuhaUHSUAhsuhaSUHAuhsuhaUSHuahsuhaHS

Kirito_Tazu
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Yosh, another Mushoku Tensei fanfic, I have high hopes for you Author-san. Take all the harems of Rudeus [Roxy, Sylphiete, and Eris] and give him another woman.

NevoNeko
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Lets get you on the board, love the idea, looking forward to future chapters, cant wait for him to walk Up to everyone like hawkeye. always loved swordmanship.

Halim_Perdana_7365
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is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

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