When the Wild Beast is Trapped in the Nightmare Cycle (BL)
After being confined in a mental asylum for years, Jin Jiuchi had just been released back to human habitation when he suddenly found himself trapped in a dangerous and thrilling survival game.
Wait, is there something wrong with you all? Why do you look so scared? This world is so… exciting!
For Jin Jiuchi, this beast in human clothing who was chained by society laws, the appearance of the Nightmare Cycle was akin to a dream come true!
Drinking tea with a dismembered bride in a haunted apartment, dancing tango with the evil spirit in the depths of suicide forest, skipping rope with the ancient god in a forgotten civilization…
Jin Jiuchi was so happy that he was going crazy! However, when he went crazy, all the players and NPCs in the cycle trembled in fear.
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There was only a beautiful jade doll who had never been afraid of him.
Shen Nianzu called out softly, "Jin-ge."
Jin Jiuchi, who was happily digging through a rotten corpse's stomach, suddenly dropped everything and zoomed in front of Shen Nianzu with a speed invisible to naked eyes. His eyes were curved into crescents as he asked, "What's wrong, Nian'er? Do you want to join me too?"
Shen Nianzu was expressionless as he stared at the bloody man in front of him. Then he suddenly stretched out a hand, palm up. Confused, Jin Jiuchi placed his dirty paw in Shen Nianzu's hand and shook it.
Shen Nianzu: “Good boy.”
Jin Jiuchi: ?
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Lunatic drama king, wild beast gong x big beauty, cunning, strong-acting-weak shou
Additional tags: top/gong/seme protagonist, action, supernatural, psychological, mystery, slow romance, ghosts, gore, monsters, beasts, shameless protagonist, survival game, teamwork, unlimited flow, horror, suspense, younger love interest
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The synopsis and title are intriguing, and the story really is something completely different from all the stories in Webnovel. It has a fresh angle, something unexpected, and lots of drama. You can feel the struggles and emotions of the characters. The grammar, as Author said, needs work but it is far better than some novels out there. It is above average and one can understand clearly. In short, you can ignore it and it doesn't really affect your reading pleasure. Now, on with the negatives. Though it is a refreshing take on all the churned out tropes out there, there are a lot of plot holes that nag at me. Things like not wanting artificial insemination as it is too risky and MIL can find out. Heck, I would think as long as she CAN get pregnant, going for IVF is nothing. MIL should be happy enough she is pregnant. But no, MIL is apparently that unreasonable. It has to be a natural conception. Then, instead of IVF for sister, she wants her husband to sleep with her instead as that has higher chance of success? And MIL unlikely to find out? If MIL is that capable, finding out that the girl is barren would be easy, wouldn't it? Not to mention, having an identical twin walking / running about in the same town? Like, no one will figure it out, sooner or later?? Those are just some of the holes that are quite glaring to me. Author does try to explain some away (like the IVF part) but even the explanation is not convincing to me. If you can ignore the plot holes and logic of them, then this novel is worth a read. All the best Author. The story has great potential. P/S Sorry if the above is slightly harsh.