if beale street could talk real story

I love this story need more updates. I could not stop reading this. I started when I reached a stop on The Strongest System which is also an A+. Zang Shi is a Beast.REAL TALK

The grammar is a detractor the way the writer writes has no real immersion it's more like some guy off the street with no real understand of cadence is telling the story. overall its needs a serious consideration on the tone it wants to set in order for readers to immerse themselves in something believable.

The title.. Is it.. Real?... I hope its not a joke.. If anyone that could access the story and change the tile, hope he would remove the negative comment on the story.. Who knows, maybe there's a few arse hole that decide to talk sh1t..

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The story is yes, it is not bad, it is just that there is no real development, personality, interaction with other characters, it must detail and deepen more in its journey, coexistence with Pokémon or battles, you could even put other points of view, etc. is that the story seems more like a summary in which they talk about where Mc is going and what he does and there is no real development in the story, although it is not all bad and has a good idea, it is not well managed and could to get better, Anyway, good luck! :)