My Boy Finally Say Yes to Me
At age 3, she knew who she wanted to marry. At age 10, she gave away her first kiss. At age 20, she became his personal bodyguard. For her childhood best friend to still run away after all this, what was the point of her learning marital art all these years? The saddest thing to come out of all this was the fact that she was the one feeling burdened all this time…
Five years later.
“Mommy! How come I am so cute but I do not have a daddy?”
“How should I know? Go ask your daddy!”
Xia Yuxun watched the newly married couple through the TV screen and answered without looking back.
Half an hour later, at the live wedding that was being broadcasted, a crying child was grabbing onto the groom’s leg and screaming “daddy”. The man stared at the miniature version of himself and asked, “Where’s your mommy?”
Xia Yuxun, who was watching this live show gulped, “You brat, you are digging your mom a hole!”
Jiong Jiong You Yao · Urban
I'd say the story is fine but the dialogue is almost insufferable, I've seen this same problem in a lot of places, the dialogues sounds almost robotic, the way they talk "looks" cool but the moment I try to imagine it in a real conversation it's so out of place (overly formal if you understand what i mean) and they all talk that same way