scar girl story
"Now, listen to me" he commanded and I instantly looked up at him. "Rule number one, no screaming. No matter what I do to you, I must not hear a single noise. If I do, it would most definitely get worse" he said and my heart hammered in my chest. "Rule number two, when I tell you to do something, you do it, or else, I will whip you repeatedly and make sure you're on the brink of death but just enough to keep you alive." He said with a wicked grin on his face. "Rule number three, follow those two rules" he said and got up. Out of the blue, he whipped me again and I screamed. I had never felt that much pain in my entire life. "Tsk tsk, you're a slow one" he said and I held my breath as I awaited the next whip. He whipped me again and I managed to stifle a scream. "Good girl" he said and went back to sit on his bed. "Now, strip." He ordered and I shakily got up and began to pull my clothes off my body. ... Kieran had a regular life until a ruthless Alpha turned it all upside down. She suffers and even gets rejected. What happens when she has a better second chance mate who is protective and the ruthless Alpha who made her life hell is butting into her life again?
A captivating story. The Enchantress had acquired a scar when she healed a girl with a similar scar. For her pains, the girl rewards her by pushing her over the cliff to her death. She is reborn as Jade, in a modern setting. She carries the same scar on her face and it mars her beautiful face. Her father is not happy to see her flawed appearance. Her mother's health is declining. She loves her flawed daughter Jade and tries everything to fix her face. The writing quality is good, story is developing nicely. The character design is good and so is the world background. It is difficult to say much about the stability of updates as only 8 chapters have been published. But from the look of the chapters this will be even better. All the best!