poorly written horror stories

Well, in many poorly written horror stories, the plot is often very thin. There's no real depth or mystery to it. It's just a series of scares strung together without any real connection. The descriptions can be overly simplistic as well. Instead of painting a vivid and terrifying picture, they just use basic words like 'dark' and'scary'. And the endings are usually very disappointing, either too abrupt or completely illogical.

First, work on the characters. Make them more complex and give them real motives. Second, vary the scares. Don't just rely on jump scares. Third, improve the descriptions. Use more vivid language. For example, instead of saying 'it was a spooky forest', say 'the forest loomed, its gnarled trees reaching out like twisted arms, the mist swirling around them like lost souls'.

Battle Through the Heavens was a popular fantasy novel by Tian Can Tu Dou. The novel was published on Qidian Chinese website and was widely loved by readers. The story was about a talented young man who had his engagement broken off because he had become a good-for-nothing. He had experienced difficult times, but he could not be underestimated! You can read authentic books and listen to authentic audio on the Qidian Reading App. The male lead's name was Xiao Yan. In his early days, he was impulsive and easily angered. His self-esteem was extremely strong, and he gradually matured. The female lead was called Xiao Xun Er. She had an aloof personality and only showed gentleness to Xiao Yan.

Well, maybe it's because the creators of those fan mangas lack professional training or don't have a deep understanding of the original story and its world-building.

I recommend the following novels: 1. "Something's Not Right with This Group of Zergs"-sci-fi space-interstellar love song novel. The Zergs did not listen to the Queen's orders, and it was a great reversal. The writing was not good, so please forgive me. It was still improving. 2. "Infinite Invasion of Reality" was a sci-fi space-time travel novel. It was a novel where everyone could enter infinity. The writing style was not good, but it was interesting. 3. "A Good Family in the 1960s" was a modern romance novel. The four members of the family all traveled back to the 1960s. In order to eat and wear warm clothes, they began to grit their teeth and persevere on their journey to a well-off life. The writing was childish but innocent and cute. 4. "The Past of Xiguan"-A short life story, a nonsensical, half-conscious comedy novel. It tells the author's past in Xiguan in a humorous, vivid, exaggerated, and funny way. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗