Having traveled to America in the year 1862, this was the beginning of a dream, the finest of times. What constitutes a true master of success? Having some notable descendants hardly counts for anything. To build an Oil Empire alongside Rockefeller To place Carnegie on the throne of the steel magnate To help Ford propel the industrialization of automobiles worldwide To lead Edison to monopolize the future of the electrical industry To be an Angel Investor for Morgan's capital Hear this, applause!
The story was fluid and interesting. I really liked the characters. Overall I found it very successful. I would like to read other stories by the author.
Could have been better but if this is begining then kiddo you will definitely rock it someday Gud luck for future stories Workhard u ll be successful one day
The starting image created was very successful. The tags just don't cover a majority of the plot so add more. I hope you continue writing and making such great stories.
The story composition is quite remarkable. With appropriate efforts by the author, this story can easily achieve that structural depth found in successful stories.