successful conservation stories

Well, the concept/idea is good but it needs work. my suggestions : 1: use tags. reincarnation, transmigrattion, avatar etc and more tags. 2: Make a longer and detailed sypnosis 3: make the personality more real, the interaction / conservation real. Emotions, give them emotions, along with atmosphere. There is no proper tension there. 4: and use ai a bit less, at least the conservation, thinking and plot part. GOOD LUCK

Classic conservation of competence. The mc is the only one who isn’t an idiot. He’s not particularly smart it’s just everyone else is dumb. It makes the story boring.

There is too much conversations like one conservation has lasted for 3 chapters or more. I feel like it's been 12 chapters yet there has been nothing done except conversation

great updates, though the story needs a lot of work. first off, actual conservation would be nice? this feels like meme and joke after joke. there is not much actual talking going on. second, the author didn't really pay attention to the details of the characters and bleach rules. third, the fighting scene's suck. there really isn't much of it. fourth, too much reference from other stories.

The story composition is quite remarkable. With appropriate efforts by the author, this story can easily achieve that structural depth found in successful stories.