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Baldysalino
BaldysalinoLv133yr
2021-10-22 23:47

great updates, though the story needs a lot of work. first off, actual conservation would be nice? this feels like meme and joke after joke. there is not much actual talking going on. second, the author didn't really pay attention to the details of the characters and bleach rules. third, the fighting scene's suck. there really isn't much of it. fourth, too much reference from other stories.

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oops, my bad

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