pose real life story

Hi Great story. There were a couple of things that made me question the actions or pose the question of "why didn't he just do this" or inform so and so. But just like in real life, when your in the moment somethings just don't come to you. Cheers!

This was a interesting way to pose some very real and deep questions. Making the tree the one not only telling the story but also showing it’s wisdom and compassion for Mia .

The characters are well made and the storyline is easy to follow the background is mondernly well explained.A bit of a shame that there is no villain that pose a real threat to the Main character and the MC is way too op .But overall it's a good story shame that it's not finished hate to see this happen.

Please tell me he doesn't actually have a cape!!! Oh and I gave you 5 stars cause I like your redoing life fanfic. Please no cape!!! Capes are for people who wants to pose like their bigger than life. Yes, Batman is a poser. He pose himself as the villain's symbol of fear even though he's just a normal person. Having green lantern powers already makes you powerful. Mastering it can even destroy superman.

The story has some interesting ideas but only at the expense of original work. Everything is too easy with no suspense or real danger. There is no conflict with the MC as he made everyone else in the world dumb or powerless. There should be at least one thing to strive for but after this many chapters there is nothing no one to pose a challenge to the MC.