real child labor stories

Gives off a Harry Potter Vibe Doesn't live with parents, abused, child labor, mysterious past, magic, mother's eyes The grammar needs serious editing. little spacing, easy to miss, difficult to understand explanations etc.

This was one of the more enjoyable trial reads this week. It has a number of issues, but if you like stories that revolve around cooking, I would say this is pretty solid. You can tell the author has done a lot of research into the cooking aspect of it. The cooking procedures and food descriptions are fairly detailed. The story focuses on cooking the whole way through, so this is definitely not for you if you don’t care for cooking content. I will warn, though, that this author has the MC “cure” someone’s anorexia with his cooking, which is just… no. This is the second webnovel I’ve read where the MC uses their culinary skill to cure someone’s eating disorder and it was just as disappointing as the first time. This author does much more research into anorexia than the other one, but ultimately shows that they don’t really have a good understanding of it. I have a few other critiques for this story, but the biggest ones are the baffling character setup and the nonsensical child labor laws. The MC is a young adult that transmigrated into the body of an eight-year old child whose parents left him and his three-year-old sister behind while they go abroad for an indefinite amount of time. Oh, and they expect the MC to figure out how to pay the mortgage and other living expenses himself even though child labor is illegal… or is it? The MC can’t be hired anywhere because of child labor laws, but it’s apparently okay for him to work for 10+ hours a day if he’s an entrepreneur as no one seems to find anything wrong with him opening his own food stall and restaurant. So, the setup with regard to child labor laws doesn’t really make any sense to me. I don’t know why the author made the MC so young to begin with. Fortunately, the cooking content is entertaining enough for me to ignore the age issue.

The author mixed Sumerian mythology and the mythology of the Fate series and created a new original work, the most labor-intensive work among fanfic stories

Great fictional story...read it throughout the night....I think the author is a great and imaginative writer who creates fictional stories that look Soo real and brings out the little child in all of us...kudod

Making a child 5 years old learn to earn and labor that's unacceptable even if it's cultivation world. What's with the child with sudden wisdom of an ***** who had endured hardship after a few chapters? 8 years would have been barely passable, 12 years would have been good plot start. But still passable since when i started reading i forget the age of MC