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This is one of the better novels I've read on this platform. The story strikes a nice balance, keeping the narrative compact enough to move rapidly along without skimping on anything important. And best of all, it knows not to overstay its welcome, giving the reader a satisfying conclusion instead of thousands of endless chapters of bloat.

Over 300 chapters in, the mc suddenly loses intelligence and incredibly stupid, the pacing becomes unbearably slow, and the story is filled with useless bloat

This is a well written and beautifully translated story that engages you with the appropriately consistent world that it portrays. While it leans on many tropes, it does so in a reasonable manner, and ensures that the reader maintains enjoyable engagement. It doesn’t noticeably suffer from word bloat and the pace is maintained comfortably. The MC while OP and overly adored, is still likeable. It may be very ‘stock’ but I find it to be a solid and enjoyable read.

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