"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
The story is great at the beginning, Harry learning magic with Hermione a fair bit before Hogwarts, However, despite being sorted into Ravenclaw with Hermione, the author still went for the rememberball scene which is confusing because the flight lessons should of been split between houses ( Gryffindor & Slytherin) ( Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff) for whatever reason all the houses except Hufflepuff were present and despite not having any prior interaction with Hagrid, the Author decided for Harry to meet and befriend Hagrid so he can give plot clues. All in all if you plan on changing the plot, it shouldn't line up so closely with the original.