A unsuspecting teen leaving the movie theaters after watching NWH suddenly gets killed by a truck, pretty cliche right? Well you're right, he gets wishes and reincarnates, the whole shebang really, but some choices won't be so, cliche, maybe. Disclaimer: I own nothing obviously, but this idea suddenly popped up in my head, started thinking it out to see if it would be any good, and it just might. -Also if you can give a good book cover that would be greatly appreciated. -Also no harem
The writing needs more polishing. Learn to describe character or any background properly. The story basically changed Tony into a hick and everything else follows the movie. There are a lot of confusing sentences like " Steve read the book". Is it really Steve or is it Howard? Even when Tony is being confused with Steve. Reread every chapter that you write and ensure it's quality.