little deaths novel

This you so so much little writer for this powerful book.. It was like I was experiencing the deaths with him At a point I felt pity on him

Author seems to get his rocks off to brutally killing little girls and tries to justify it whilst glossing over the deaths of male characters, it goes beyond a darkfic and becomes snuffporn, there is nothing redeeming about his obsessive need to kill little girls. The mc is psychotic which wouldn’t be bad if it wasn’t for the fact that to author didn’t intend/notice that he was making the mc insane. So to put it short, the author needs some serious therapy for sexualising deaths of little girls!

This story was an enjoyable read for the first 160-170 chapters. After the Enigma Red Dungeon arc, the story has gone on a downward spiral. In an attempt to spark progress in the story and incite character development, multiple deaths occur within the dungeon arc. In my opinion, some of these deaths are very confusing, serving no relevant purpose. Afterwards, a major event occurs which drastically alters the MC’s current personality and relationships. It is followed by a timeskip, introducing new plot points with little to no explanation. This was the point at which I dropped the novel. However, I hope that the novel may get better in later arcs.

Day 3 of reading this novel which is turning out better than anticipated albeit I was initially concerned about the different deaths occurring.

i like the World and the different races i also like the characters but i think they need a little more depth and would love a litttle more deaths soon to compliment the fury of the main character and give him some drive for more strength