naruto sasuke shikamaru team fanfiction

I like your story about naruto smurfing into the past, however, the fact that naruto told sasuke and shikamaru about he came from the future doesn't make any sense and could destroy his plan. I do not like it. you should make sasuke and shikamaru forget all about it with a memory erase jutsu or something. please, that scene really bothers me alot and naruto is suppose to keep this as a secret. I would understand if 3rd hokage sama would know instead of sasuke and shikamaru. Even if shikamaru could slowly develop a theory about what he saw on naruto, you should have let naruto keep it as a secret and naruto should have excused something else when he knock off sasuke, like "its a genjutsu". its easy that way cause its very dumb to let sasuke and shikamaru know that hes from the future. besides he can finish off the prevention of war by himself

there was a better way you could have written, you could recruit some of Naruto's friends like sasuke, sakura as a doctor or Shikamaru as crew members but you can't just poach people that's just forceful.

so disgusting. Sakura is in the team and sasuke wants to improve how relations. I thoughts sasuke will be cool and detaches but he is another Naruto . so disgusting.

"The thing I hate the most in Naruto fanfics is when they don't put Naruto in Team 7. That alone completely changes the story and its course. And honestly, the last thing I care about are characters like Choji, Hinata, or Shikamaru."

I like this novel, because it shows sakura is not a burden on the team, she looks a burden just because naruto and sasuke are full of plot armor, come on sakura is just a civilian but look at naruto he is an Uzumaki and has kurama then sasuke is uchiha and has sharingan