issei the gamer fanfiction

It's good at the beginning when Erik is still the mc then the dxd canon cane and *PUFF* Erik became issei's plot armor and like every fanfiction, I read with issei on it the author is a simp for issei like issei this issei that, issei is not even a likable character but oh well author wants author do😒

If issei isn't killed it's bad fanfiction 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤

There is a limit to what is acceptable in terms of grammar and writing quality. This fanfiction contains by far the worst grammar out of all of the non-english native fanfictions that I have read on this site, and that is a lot of them. As for the story, there is nothing new, although there are some interesting components such as the gamer system, but that is it, really. As for character design, Issei's parents are not given a name despite being elevated into incredibly important characters in the story, it is somewhat understandable considering that they are the parents of the Issei from the original work, but the author needs to take risks and just name them, as it is too confusing otherwise. In conclusion, this fanfiction is very below average and it is hard to point out all of the mistakes without taking up 20 pages of a hardback book.

This fanfiction is already on fanfiction.net and it has more chapters on there reaching the thirties but it is a really good fanfiction including both the gamer and fate.

This is not an original work. NikaTheHonoredOne stole this from the original author, Oghenevwogaga, who uploaded it on both spacebattles and fanfiction.net under the title, "Gamer of the Desert". Links to it can be found here- https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14211633/1/Gamer-of-The-Desert, and https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/gamer-of-the-desert.1080300/