a returners magc should be special light novel

gonna be honest here, this basiclly a copy of a returners magic should be special (like the exact copy) but with a diffrent mc and forced scenes. mc gets op to fast so authorlegit just nerfed him LOL making him slack on his training and nurture other people instead of himself. i give it a 7/10 webnovel stars meaning 3/10 normal novel

The story is awesome and u should bring some special weapons from dying light to the story. Also u should add warren from z Nation to the harem and bring doc and 10,000k to the camp.

I don't know why but I thought this was a Harry Potter fic so when I started reading I was going in expecting that but it's not it seems like a magic type cultivation? I think the best example would be "a returners magic should be special" would be a good example grammar is solid the story development is alright it keeps you hooked for the most part character design is its alright I don't really know what better way to put it background Is pretty solid over all 4 stars

the writer should be updating the novel on light reader. the writer should try and be consistent on the light reader app, you should also consider your readers feelings

This is special. The chronicler finds a way to be both mythical and grounded. The stories are light and charming. The only thing wrong with this novel, is that it's too short.