editing a fiction book

Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives

# decisive Shen Ran transmigrates to a fantasy world and becomes a disciple of the Empyrean Sword Sect. Problem is, everything about him is ordinary— ordinary talent, ordinary temperament, ordinary life… In this cruel world where cultivation talent determines how far one could go, this means that Shen Ran's future can be seen at a glance. Banished to the servant quarters as a servant disciple, his daily grind is to attend to mundane chores which will go on until he dies of old age a hundred years later. Then he comes across a narrative modification system which makes it possible to rewrite entire lives! An avid reader of online novels in his previous life, Shen Ran relishes the chance to read the narratives of everyone and everything and alter them. The narratives modified by him will become reality! This is the story of how he transforms his ordinary life by editing his narrative and going on to cultivate the Dao, handle calamities, and rule the ages. And he is limited only by his imagination!

Brother Mahua · Eastern

I'm An Incubus: Black Blood [In Editing]

University student Rin Ito just wanted a peaceful life, that's all he asked for, but that was all six months ago. Now he's bein forced to pry in a world he never wanted and never knew he had, and he sooo desperately didn't want this either, but the more he discovered about his own self, the more he started questioning his sanity. Yet one question remained, will he continue to stay an Incubus like his father before him, or will he turn into a being far worst and dangerous; only one thin' knows it. But forget about that, it's way too soon? He's barely even discovering his incubus side? Like will he be able to seduce like the rest of his kind? Will he be able to kill to protect the ones he loves? Also, will that yandere chick ever leave him alone?! And what the hell? Why is his magic so unstable!? But forget that, there's something more importantly! Because now it comes down to will he fall from his own path and use what his father gave him, or will he expose who and what he truly is and give in to the wild voices. Or will he just deny it all? Well, that's for you to find out. --- This novel can go anywhere from simple travelling to a quest, to moving to another realm?! Will Rin finally lose his sanity and drain everythin alive dry jus to satisfy his hunger and bloodlust, or will he try somethin different? Damn, I'm pretty sure we know the answer to that. Anyways, I'm just lettin you know he's kinda submissive in the begining and might be a puny Mc, But as the book goes on so does his powers, and he started becoming.. More of a Demon than you may think. Also it'll seem like he's powerful let's say around the first to the 100th chapter, but he's in no way truly powerful. Also in the first volume there will be a few cases an long missions where he does become a girl, but after the first 100 chapters it's all going to be about him as a male till I see got that we need him to turn into his female form. This book revolves around most to all races. The cover belongs to someone else, if they want it to be removed just find a way to let me know or I won't do it. . . . . . Information. . . . . I started this book 2 years ago, and as of now, Dec 7th, 2022, I'm starting to go back over it and edit it so I can start writing again, mainly to spite a friend on this site. . . . . .Recommended. . . . . Also I have a friend who's with me most of the times, an stuff, their name is TurtleMaster6319, show them some love and check out their work, it's pretty good you know. Also about them, they used to help me and Eve out with a bunch of our novels together, Eve the other author is now in collage and no longer with us, so it's just me.

Monarch6319 · Urban

A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

Sometimes your time to die has come, and sometimes stupid gods are the reason. For Marc Cassidy, it was the latter. Fortunately for him, he got another chance to live in another world, away from Earth. In the bargain of that chance, he got one of the most awesome cheat ability available, a RPG like system. On the other hand, the goddess he scammed turn him into the worst of the worst creature, a rat. Of course for this petty act, Marc is humble and forgiving. He will not take revenge, he will just try to be powerful enough to repay that favor. In the meantime, how can a system help him survive and grow stronger in a strange fantasy world? Currently, looking for an editor to correct my chapters. And finally, you will be able to enjoy real chapters cleanly written.

Innovation · Fantasy

The Witch CEO is NOT a Demoness [Completed] (Editing--On Process)

High bun, eyeglasses, long sleeve shirt and plaited skirt. Dressed so strictly, FengJiu reached 28 without having any intimate interaction with men. At an early age, being an orphan, FengJiu dedicated herself on taking good care of her grandfather and their business, choosing to live a life different from a normal teenager. Now, as the CEO of Feng International, people view her as a stoic woman without emotions. Deep inside, FengJiu is like any other women, want to experience the beauty of life and romance. Due to the pressure of her grandfather in her marriage, FengJiu decided to let herself experience the life of a single woman without worries before tying the knot (marriage). For the first time in her life, she got drunk and party all night. Huh? Why is she naked? Eh? Ehh?! "Woman, after eating me dry, you have to take responsibility." a shameless man said. In an instant, she became his 'sugar mommy'. What?! This shameless NEET whom she 'adopted' is the owner of Lu Corporation, her enemy?! Before she could escape, she got tied on the bed. "Woman, you better chose wisely. You will marry me or I will marry you?" She strictly rejects him after knowing everything but every inch of her body craves for him otherwise. (N.E.E.T.- Not in Education, Employment or Training aka Unemployed) [PLEASE ADOPT ME \(T^T)/ and DONATE @ paypal.me/sayurihyuuga] New Novel- The Rebirth of the Female Antagonist: XuanRong [Webnovel] Cover: Pristine Editor and Proofreader: RenTheView and Moonlitnight.

SayuriHyuuga · General

Long Live, the Queen! (R18) (Under Editing)

[MATURE CONTENT] Enter the world of Lila Elara Forbes Montgrave, a rose with thorns, shaped by tragedy and reborn with vengeance. Betrayed by her lover and given a second shot at life, she uses her beauty as a weapon in a deadly game of love, hate, and power. But as her past and present meet, will she reshape her fate or succumb to the darkness within? Warning: Viewers discretion is advised. Read at your own risk.

jelomaine · History

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